(WIP) Broken Script
Broken Script is short film loosely based on a short story written by Brioche in 2015.
Previous Titles: 2047, Renee, I Will Always Remember You
Finalised Title: Broken Script
Throughout the development of my thesis film, the story has undergone multiple revisions, each with its own set of animatics. Here, you’ll find the first two iterations. Once the film is complete, I’ll be sharing the storyboards and animatic for the final version. Stay tuned — more to come soon!
1st draft — 2047
2047 is a mere statistic in a sea of billions - literally. Just like everyone else, her entire future is pre-written in a series of digits, and her actions are dictated by the code of the System that the city runs on. Just like everyone else, 2047 is normal. Until she isn’t. SYSTEM ERROR. 2047 DOES NOT EXIST. Who are you when the System glitches?
Based on a short story written by Brioche in 2015, this initial draft remains the most faithful adaptation of the original work.
First animatic draft
First characters draft
Concept drawings
2nd draft — Renee
In a dystopian future, No. 40 rebels against a society where people are microchipped and controlled. As she approaches her 15th birthday, she discovers her true name and decides to destroy the system by pressing a red button hidden in a secret room, despite facing opposition from a mysterious man.
This adaptation is a reimagined spin-off of Brioche’s short story, set in a fictional city inspired by New York.
Second animatic draft
Vertical slice background
Second character draft
Renee walking